tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7313130055534395503.post2135041835654615609..comments2023-09-17T06:13:58.403-04:00Comments on Unshakeable Hope: "Lovin' the Language" blogfest...Yes, I'm still writing.Heidi Willishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18420802651029097379noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7313130055534395503.post-4048727663972411742011-06-29T08:41:23.889-04:002011-06-29T08:41:23.889-04:00"...creating the image of moving corpses.&quo..."...creating the image of moving corpses." I love it. Great imagery here evoking emotion. I'd encourage you to send to send to a lit magazine!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7313130055534395503.post-41760377622794001642011-06-28T22:05:35.488-04:002011-06-28T22:05:35.488-04:00Kaylee - thank you! I love the "color of cobw...Kaylee - thank you! I love the "color of cobwebs" line. I had to work for that one. It started out as grey and went through a series of other equally unevocative colors. I think my favorite lines are always the ones I had to work a little to get. :)Heidi Willishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18420802651029097379noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7313130055534395503.post-88400826930474361082011-06-28T14:56:58.766-04:002011-06-28T14:56:58.766-04:00Awesome!!! You are good!Awesome!!! You are good!Terri Tiffanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07771622379178654235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7313130055534395503.post-5453845922576274932011-06-28T11:32:06.502-04:002011-06-28T11:32:06.502-04:00Love it - great imagery.Love it - great imagery.Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00685341739870191402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7313130055534395503.post-41702678794156301302011-06-28T09:13:37.949-04:002011-06-28T09:13:37.949-04:00Lovin' the imagery - especially -
Fluorescent ...Lovin' the imagery - especially -<br /><i>Fluorescent lights cast an unnatural glow over the line workers, creating the illusion of moving corpses, fitting for a dying industry.</i><br />You have set the tone with beautiful language!Briannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581532070734685757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7313130055534395503.post-30965023792454809382011-06-27T23:19:25.156-04:002011-06-27T23:19:25.156-04:00I really love your images here.
"guillotine-l...I really love your images here.<br />"guillotine-like blade" "moving corpses" "color of cobwebs" Gives me shivers. Love the tone here.Kaylee Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12707226153627779741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7313130055534395503.post-67824582755320051152011-06-27T22:59:40.469-04:002011-06-27T22:59:40.469-04:00WOW.
LOVE it :D
Your writing kicks a**, you know...WOW.<br /><br />LOVE it :D<br /><br />Your writing kicks a**, you know that, right??<br /><br />This blogfest has been SO MUCH FUN!Jolene Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14809468564016928636noreply@blogger.com